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Flames That Burn In My Eyes by ~BoricuaGirl:iconBoricuaGirl:



"Flames That Burn In My Eyes"

I came across a boy,
who was no ordinary toy.
His name was full of desire,
flames soon burned in my eyes like fire.
We soon came into a fight,
which did not seem so right.
I was going to leave when he has something to say,
so I stood and listened before I was on my way.
The first 3 words he said was "I love you",
she was then shocked and did now know what to do.

Soon they got together,
but fought at times but they got better.
He dissapeared for a month without a trace,
she looked for him like a shoe without it's lace.
She bugged her friend about him all the time,
and he tried his best to help her shine.
One day the boy appeared again,
she asked him where he had been since she knew when.
He then said he was bored of visiting some sites,
she then started another fight.

But soon the fight had ended,
no one had been offended.
But soon she got depressed one more,
since he was ignoring her like she was a door.
But then her friend spoked with him,
and he turned less dim.

So now he treats her his best,
she then knew this was not a test.
Now only over again his name was burning with desire,
her eyes flaming like fire.
Now he treats her like his dove,
and they both spread love.
©2006-2009 ~BoricuaGirl
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Submitted: March 12, 2006
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Well this is my thrid poem. Hope you like it.
This poem is about a boy I fell for. ^_^
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*still wants to know who it is*
O_O Are you serious? You know who it is...
no i mean from the other one
O_O and I get no com ment on this poem?._. ;_; Rude...hmph.
yesh i have a comment
thy poetry has left me thy speechless
Very Good Ciara n_n

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Pro:
Sonic X Amy (<3)
Shadow X Maria (<3)
Yin X Forest (My Fan Chacarter couple :3)
Cream X Tails
Knuckles X Tikal
Tails X Cosmo
Sonic Chao X Amy Chao (<3)
Tails X Amy <3)
Tails X Wave

Couples I hate:
Shadow X Amy(I use to not anymore)
Sonic
I think that's a wonderful poem, Ciara! ^.^
Thanks, mommy. ^.^ :heart:

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